I know these are WIP, but I think some comments are already in order.
- why not the standard blue colour for the windows?
- the paint strips on the structure are just that, paint strips. no need to outline those in black. the same goes for the funnel
- the hull shading does not represent the actual hull. you've taken it from this, I suppose:
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-6xxaToFc0k4/T ... e+view.gif ?
it does however represent an knuckle in at least the above the waterline hull. this is currently not shown.
- the bridge seems not have been entirely accurate in representation on your drawings.
- pictures show the underwater hull, or at least the waterline, to be of an different colour.
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http://www.fsg-ship.de/103-1-Strat-ocea ... orter.html this might help a bit....
- I also found this
http://z11.invisionfree.com/shipbucket/ar/t998.htm might help as well.
- the lifeboat on the stern (the small one) is hinged in an david
- the crane looks a bit off, you might want to check it's size with pics
- the propeller looks flimsy, or at least the shaft does. I think it lightly the strut is bigger and there are some more supports (or this one is thicker). the bow thruster looks small as well.
other then the above, I only think they look a bit bland, which most likely will see fixing in the next update, I suppose