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4nd Updatet
Change doors and shadows. added some details. It is funny that this skip and MS "NOrdstjernen"("North Star") is still used in winter time by the "Hurtigruten" (coastal steamer). Must be because they are better see-boat, than one of those modern boxes!

I miss most, if not all, of the shading. look again at the shipbucket drawing rules -.-

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there are shading, but i miss the shading under the life rafts/boat. should i have more shading on the hull?

I know that there are three bar railing when I should have used two bar railing, ... change?

Agreed on the railings, just finish them off to Shipbucket standard. The hull doesn't conform to the standard of shading. Re the superstructure; looking close up it does look odd the way you've applied a blue shade onto a white background. Admittedly, its not easy working with white, but you are showing a lot of shading where there is no overhangs or the need to indicate a curved surface - as in the bridge front. I personally opt for showing the light coming from the bows aft, so that would call for a lighter shade anyway, but with white you're probably best leaving this out as you really can't go lighter anyway. And you don't need to apply that deep shading under items such as lifeboats; and you've invented your own doors, which again aren't standard and appear to extend down to the deck - not realistic. As you are producing a large amount of work - and well done, you should now get back to the guidelines to get your drawings acceptable.

Keep up the good work on Real life

thx

Black and white are quite difficult colors.
Normally I use an RGB 250,250,250 as white instead of a full 255,255,255.

I would have some doubts about the level lines: on mu opinion you drawn too much on the underwater part of the hull-

Moreover the gangway should be black outlined.

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