a few comments......
first of all, parts.
- you mirrored the gun, so the starboard view shows the wrong side of the gun
- there is an new sea dart launcher, as the ones you have is slightly too big. for reference, we also have the belowdeck parts...
- that goalkeeper is old and horrible, I would advise you to swap it for the latest ones. the latest one also has belowdeck parts, which might come handy..... I will return to that later.
all these can be found in the belowdeck parts thread
I would also look into the radars if I were you, at least the large search radar is redrawn IIRC.
second, the design.
it looks interesting! I see a lot of influence from the type 43
it might help to take a look at miho's drawing of it here:
http://www.shipbucket.com/images.php?di ... e%2043.png
EDIT: and of bombheads of course, but miho's has the latest parts and is on the main site..... didn't know we had 2 recent drawings of the same ship :S
but in the differences between that and your ship pose some problems.
- both the ships are about the same size. still, you have VLS seawolf (taking more deckspace) and could take only 2 lynxes or 1 sea king, while you have 2 sea king sized hangars. I would think you would run into problems there.....
- at least some of those problems are visible. how is your engine room laid out? I see funnels in the middle, air intakes at the side, so where are the hangars? I would think the entire engine setup would be staggered, while the turbines might be amidships, the funnels and intakes would each be at one side
- the goalkeeper penetrates in your hangar or in your intakes. or both. uhm.....
what about fitting it somewhere else?
- with the hangar next to the funnel aft, I doubt that boat is going to fit next to it. I would also take an better looking RHIB then this drawing....
- the rudder looks somewhat small to me.
- while this is not an mistake or error, I myself would personally put the air search radar aft and the targeting radar (992) forward. the original type 43 has it the way you have though, so I suppose there are good reasons against, but I would always keep the lines between command center and fire control radar as short as possible.
all in all, I would try to make her just a bit bigger, add an gun aft to make her fully double ended and get a bit more growth space out of her hull. moving the seawolf more amidships (at the beam) and the goalkeepers fore and aft would seem like an good idea too.
drawing wise, I only have that the coms next to the aft mast have no black outlines, and the fact that I do not like the way too harsh but soft at the same time look of that underwater hull shading