Shipbucket

Good stuff but the railing should always be a darker color than the camouflage color behind it - this helps it stand out. It's very tough to see it when it's lighter than the color behind it, especially as traditionally the railing is always darker than the base color.

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USN components, camouflage colors, & reference links (World War II only)

Point well taken, Colosseum. Image adjusted accordingly and for the better. Thanks for your input, guys.

Monty

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Keep well and keep drawing,

Monty

Looking nice now.

I also don't think it's really necessary to put the color chips (save that for an RN WW2 parts sheet) and I think it unnecessarily clutters the drawing. My preference is to just mention the camouflage scheme depicted in the second credit line. I hate to always use the Alaska as an example, but take a look here to see what I mean.

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USN components, camouflage colors, & reference links (World War II only)

Sublime, a pure joy to look.
I agree with Colosseum's remark about the color chip though, but all in all a great re-work of an excellent drawing.

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Thank you Kim for the crest

"Never fear to try on something new. Remember that the Titanic was built by professionals, and the Ark by an amateur"

Absolutrly right Novice. And no need for credit for help and advice Monty. Best place for that is the archive where it deserves to be.

No problem at all, gentlemen. It's just that I was so glad to receive a quality copy of the colour chips that I felt it would be a bonus to include them in the drawing. But, since the colours are already in the drawing, I have taken your sound advice and removed the chips. All's well.

Monty

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Keep well and keep drawing,

Monty

Excellent work. This looks really fine with the camouflage scheme applied.

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Hood's Worklist
English Electric Canberra FD
Interwar RN Capital Ships
Super-Darings
Never-Were British Aircraft

Magnificent! Well done

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DD County Class PNS Babur (1982)(PAK)
FF Type 21 Class D182 PNS Babur (2000)(PAK)
All relevant Coat of Arms

I just saw the updated camo scheme...BEAUTIFUL! And nice avatar, too!

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