You do have to think about the calibre of any ships designers free to design ships for magazines in 1940 (and what the security officer would allow you to print, especially for the GB design)
The things that stand out for me,
- the assumption about size of airdropped bombs (2' deck stopping them)
- The DP guns 5.25 and then more 4.7s shows a lack of understanding of different RN types and what they might be good at IMO)
- Not just the 3 turrets but the fact that you have a Q turrets and 3 types AND still 14' on a 70kt BB
-'gun turrets rounded off...' This shows a lack of understanding of why you slope a belt to improve protection (and that it should slope the other way !)
- The exhaust and the big engine room split into 2 will help you if they flood
- the torpedo hit (obviously a US torpedo
and magnetic fuses have already been made if not perfected by now)
JSB