A few months back, I made the switch from flying the 757/767 freighter to flying the A320 family with Canada's flag carrier. I saw Ukraineball's A319/A320 series and felt inspired to do the same for Air Canada. It turned out to be a time-consuming process, but I did my best to show all the major liveries from 1990 until now.
I used Ro-Po Max's excellent A320 as a base and modified it to include the A319 and the A321, so many thanks to Ro-Po Max for creating such a great base drawing to which I could clumsily apply some additional liveries. As always, comments and feedback are much appreciated - enjoy!
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@Rainmaker
Although I have to commend amount of effort and sophistication of Your work, I'm afraid, that it's not really quite SB/FD-compliant work. Most of it is not related to Your part of work (although that leaf on tail of C-GBHM, C-FDQV and C-GJWI is borderline gradient), basic problem is that You decided to use Ro-Po Max's work as a base, and unfortunately I wouldn't encourage anyone to use his works for that purpose. Ro-Po Max's drawings are very sophisticated, but precisely of it are NOT SB/FD-compliant (I wasn't commenting much on it before, because Ro-Po Max posts primarily in AU threads, where I don't bother too much to call for compliance with rules), including for some features that go explicitly against rules and/or established principles. Primary "sins" are excess amount of shades (like 5 of them on the fuselage itself, not counting areas shaded by wing and horizontal stabilizer - just 5 BASIC shades where standard is 3 - highlight/basic/shaded) and under-use of black contour, which is missing from contour of rudder, elevator, wing mechanization, outline of windows and doors and major hatches and some other places (like where horizontal stablizer and wing meets fuselage and where engine meets mount, but these are grey area).
Albion00 wrote: * | November 30th, 2022, 8:01 pm |
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Hiiii eswube. Thank you for the feedback. I apologize for the delayed update, but here are the improved versions for both the AEW and civilian versions.
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@Albion00
It seems that You've misunderstood my feedback, and You've "improved" these drawings out of SB/FD altogether and into the "Non-Shipbucket Drawings" forum. Seriously.
To begin with, it's a massive shade overkill: You're using SEVEN shades (strong highlight, medium highlight, basic, medium shade, strong shade, ultra-strong shade, panel lines on ultra-strong shade), and except for one, all are used universally on all areas. Earliest FD drawings used only FOUR shades (highlight, basic, shade, panel lines on shade), these days most commonly amount is, I believe five or six (I use six), but some of them only for very limited purposes - these are: highlight, basic, shade, overhang shade/panel lines on shade (mainly used to show curvature of the elements that are shaded by wings, horizontal stabilizers and the like), panel lines on overhang shade (few pixels per drawing, on average), "semi-contour" (used to draw outlines that don't warrant marking them in black).
You have, for example, two shades on the trailing edge of rudder, even though one, or even zero, would suffice, because it's not really a rounded thing (unlike leading edge) to a degree appreciable in this scale. I don't understand the highlights surrounding the passenger windows (and of irregular shapes, at that). Between aft door and horizontal stabilizer there are some things that look like air intakes (or something similar) - places where are the actual breaks in continuity of surface (the actual holes) should be marked in black. I don't understand why bottom surface of horizontal stabilzer is painted in darker shade than of the wing. Shape of highlight near the cockpit is also wrong - it's not turning in a gentle arc towards the nose, across the cockpit, but approximately follows the upper contour of the fuselage (it's not a teardrop-hulled submarine). And IMHO there are too many shades used in windows, but I'm not insisting on this, because some other artist also have a penchant for using multiple shades on what essentialy is just a flat glass surface.
Below there is a comparison of Your SAAB repainted in false colors with one of my works also in false colors, representing what is basically a usual practice in SB/FD.
Good evening gentlemen!
My first drawings after a pause (once again this year, health issues
). A classic little warbird in South and Central America: the Cessna A37B Dragonfly.
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@Reytuerto
Great to see You back. Hope You'll health will improve decidedly from now on!
Nice work, but I'd say that thick 3-pixel outline along the upper contour of cockpit is unnecessary and single black line would suffice, because at this angle the frame that goes through the middle of canopy doesn't really stand above the transparent part. Also the windscreen is IMHO too bulging and at this scale a straight line would be enough too (suggested alteration added at the bottom of the sheet below). Also, some tweaks to the shading could be applied, if I may suggest so. Btw. "various
Los Angeles users"? (if it's multi-country sheet, then we use format "country of manufacturer, name" - and it's A-37 with hyphen)
@Garlicdesign
Nice, but what's wrong with version done by Garlicdesign and Naixoterk? (
http://shipbucket.com/vehicles/3726 )