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Author:  Napododidelyone [ October 19th, 2018, 5:19 pm ]
Post subject:  SS Boundless, Passenger
SS Boundless, Passenger
A deeper foray of mine into understanding this community and shipbuilding style. Criticism is welcome and appreciated
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Author:  Novice [ October 19th, 2018, 8:10 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: SS Boundless, Passenger
I enclose your drawing with some more obvious issues which, IMHO should be fixed
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As you see the placement of the ship in the template is outside of the accepted boundaries. Also the second credit line (artist's name) should be exactly under the first credit line. See all drawings in the archive for instant.
Some issues are with the drawing. One: under the funnel tere is a break in the deck line, which I think is due to some oversight.
Two: derricks are too massive, especially for a passenger ship. See the archive for similar ships (French El Mansour just pops up to me)
Three: on the deck houses you have various non continuous grey lines, not all of the same colour as well.
Four: life rings are some how look flawed.
I would also suggest you use the new portholes standard (3 by 3 pixels - smaller but neater)
Please refer to the site guidelines, concerning how to draw, place drawings in templates and use credits.
Author:  Napododidelyone [ October 26th, 2018, 10:19 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: SS Boundless, Passenger
Here are some updates in accordance with your suggestions. Please feedback is appreciated
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