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Author: | Class 801 [ June 27th, 2018, 7:23 am ] |
Post subject: | Alstom Metropolis C830/C830C |
Author: | eswube [ July 1st, 2018, 7:44 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Alstom Metropolis C830/C830C |
It looks like a nice start but I see some problems there. Most importantly, there's a lot of double black lines: most notably on the doors and the equipment below the cabin. Secondly, it seems to have no shading at all. |
Author: | Class 801 [ July 2nd, 2018, 2:56 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Alstom Metropolis C830/C830C |
The double lines on the doors were merely there to denote extra width, where three lines would be deemed too wide and one line too narrow. However, I can understand where you're coming from regarding the underfloor equipment, and the shading was definitely too subtle (only being on the bumpers). |
Author: | eswube [ July 3rd, 2018, 6:16 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Alstom Metropolis C830/C830C |
I'm afraid that 'double black line' thing isn't an optional matter. On the doors You have even 'triple black line' on top of it. |
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