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Author:  Napododidelyone [ June 5th, 2018, 9:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Patentee, Civilian ship

A small civilian vessel I created for testing out the shipbucket style before creating the Zephyr.
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Author:  Kannevets [ June 5th, 2018, 10:04 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Patentee, Civilian ship

What font are you using?

Author:  Novice [ June 6th, 2018, 8:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Patentee, Civilian ship

Apart from the wrong font type, here are some more remarks
The first concerns the template -as I believe your ship is too high. You need to place the ship's waterline on the indicated line.
There is a standard type of railing, which is commonly used, instead of drawing a unique type for each ship.
Windows and portholes are painted in a uniform colour through every ships drawing, your's is the wrong colour.

Author:  Novice [ June 6th, 2018, 8:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Patentee, Civilian ship

[snip] double post :oops: [snip]

Author:  JSB [ June 6th, 2018, 9:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Patentee, Civilian ship

Hi welcombe,

First let me congratulate you for picking such a nice sensible ship to start with I certainly didn't.... :-P

I would add,
- Sadly you haven't saved it as PNG
- I would reduce the double black lines on the masts and a few other places (funnel, stairs, boats, flagpole) and add them on the propeller?

Author:  Napododidelyone [ June 7th, 2018, 4:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Patentee, Civilian ship

Here are some improvements, I have trouble with fonts on the program I use, however.
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