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INdian INS Kolkata Class
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Author:  Jeff Head [ June 22nd, 2012, 11:19 pm ]
Post subject:  INdian INS Kolkata Class
Here's the line art I created for the Kolkata for use here, and on my Aegis and Aegis-like vessels of the world site, HERE:

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Let me know what you think. When ready if can be submitted to the Real Design for India under INS Kolkata Class DDG.
Author:  Lazer_one [ June 22nd, 2012, 11:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: INdian INS Kolkata Class
there is still a lot of work to do...
Author:  TimothyC [ June 22nd, 2012, 11:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: INdian INS Kolkata Class
Let me start by moving this to the proper forum, because this isn't up to Shipbucket standards.
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Author:  acelanceloet [ June 22nd, 2012, 11:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: INdian INS Kolkata Class
is this meant to represent this ship?
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if it is, you'd better start over and do it properly.
the search radar is an LW-08, but you have used an outdated drawing. the correct version is on the dutch parts sheet.
the main guidance radar.... you haven't drawn it at all, you have used an part of an completely unrelated ship
funnels are wrongly sized and positioned
hull is..... oh god no
what are those missiles meant to be?

also, shipbucket drawings are no shipbucket drawings when you have blurred lines. take a look at the guidelines, please. those will also point you at colouration errors.

that's about it for now..... but certainly not all. if you get these points correct you are on the right track, though.
Author:  TimothyC [ June 23rd, 2012, 12:02 am ]
Post subject:  Re: INdian INS Kolkata Class
Now, before we get a lot of posts critiquing the drawing, which we will get to later, I need to confirm that you are the Jeff Head that runs jeffhead.com (and drew this).

-TimothyC
Author:  Jeff Head [ June 23rd, 2012, 4:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: INdian INS Kolkata Class
acelanceloet wrote:
is this meant to represent this ship?
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if it is, you'd better start over and do it properly.
the search radar is an LW-08, but you have used an outdated drawing. the correct version is on the dutch parts sheet.
the main guidance radar.... you haven't drawn it at all, you have used an part of an completely unrelated ship
funnels are wrongly sized and positioned
hull is..... oh god no
what are those missiles meant to be?

also, shipbucket drawings are no shipbucket drawings when you have blurred lines. take a look at the guidelines, please. those will also point you at colouration errors.

that's about it for now..... but certainly not all. if you get these points correct you are on the right track, though.
Thanks for the critiques. This is my first attempt here and I will work on it to get it right according to the standards.

I appreciate the feedback.

Again, thanks.
Author:  Jeff Head [ June 23rd, 2012, 4:35 am ]
Post subject:  Re: INdian INS Kolkata Class
TimothyC wrote:
Now, before we get a lot of posts critiquing the drawing, which we will get to later, I need to confirm that you are the Jeff Head that runs jeffhead.com (and drew this).

-TimothyC
I am.
Author:  TimothyC [ June 23rd, 2012, 5:54 am ]
Post subject:  Re: INdian INS Kolkata Class
Commenting on this drawing may resume.

Jeff, here are the basics of Shipbucket.

I have a few other things to say when I am rested.
Author:  Colombamike [ June 23rd, 2012, 11:38 am ]
Post subject:  Re: INdian INS Kolkata Class
Jeff-Head
If you want to draw the Kolkata DDG class, don't forget few things....
The Kolkata class use the same hull that the Delhi DDG class

Few others stuffs
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and use the Mumbai DDG Hull here
Author:  acelanceloet [ June 23rd, 2012, 2:43 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: INdian INS Kolkata Class
thank you for the go-ahead timothy, as there is still a lot to do....
- your 3D targeting radar is still wrong shaped and blurred
- the nav radars are definitely no VARIANT radars
- that gun looks wrong, any information of which one it is?
- black outlines! both for missiles, the hatches, radar support constructions etc.
- there can be no straight vertical lines in a ship they call stealth, still you have a lot. I think you should recheck those.....
- I have doubts that is how the stabilisation foot for the LW-08 will look. you might want to take a look at the pictures of this mast on for example your own website
- look those missiles up in shipbucket standard instead of copying them from wherever you got those grey blobs
- there seems to be something wrong with the sizes of your ship

and I believe you have not fixed all of the earlier mentioned stuff yet....
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