Shipbucket

First attempt at FD drawing. Any and all comments much appreciated

Sadly, to begin with, the template is extremely oversized (mis-scaled)...



As a result, the drawing itself is also oversized (mis-scaled) and it also suffers from number of other issues (drawing-wise - leaving the design issues aside) like heavy corners, anti-aliasing, artifact, excessive amount of shades...

Alright, second attempt

Oh my...
Before we go anywhere else... one thing to begin with:
see the difference? (it applies to ALL of Your drawing)
(note that black used for contour is NOT the same as black used for "paint")

(left - as is, right - as should be)


Next thing - the 15-7 marking on plan view: it is left in blurry multiple-shade format - in FD it's possible to use as little as 4 shades of any given color (though I use 5-6 - but 1-2 of them in minimal amount). (and in fact Your work is completely lacking any shading at all)

And here's the (oversized) example of shading: (gradation from brightest to darkest: yellow - orange - red - maroon - purple)