Right... I've rebuilt your bridge. I added an armoured conning tower (a common sight on this era vessel). I had to leave the aft director where it was, I couldn't find a better place for it.
I moved the searchlights around, I think you can leave them now.
The Bridge isn't great, I'm not great at bridges, but I've done my best, using Royal Oak and the QE as my examples.
Tell me what you think: