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Andorianus
Post subject: Re: Anghellis Class CruiserPosted: May 18th, 2011, 1:34 pm
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I don't really like this version, feels like there's a lot of things missing to the bridge.
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I copied most parts from the old one; wasn't much bad with that one, I suppose.

Anything else?

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Post subject: Re: Anghellis Class CruiserPosted: May 18th, 2011, 2:07 pm
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now we can actually start!
as first: the bridge should be longer, as right now you have no space for the CIC. put the SMART-L a bit lower and a bit forward, this gives you more hangar space, and removes the APAR's blind spot (for the best positions for both, see the heigths they have on the LCF, the Sachsen and the danish patrouilleskibe)
add an real deck at the bow, again look at similar ships, or at my designs in the wingedheroes thread. (which have similar layouts)

you can also put the VLS and the gun at the bow after you added the 'deck', but remove the goalkeeper on the bridge for now, and heigthen the bridge a bit. (this is also done by putting the 'deck' on the bow, that will help a lot)
you see, I let you doing all the work now..... this is the real drawing work! the stuff before this was only research and defining.

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Post subject: Re: Anghellis Class CruiserPosted: May 19th, 2011, 4:05 pm
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Lol, nice. After 6 pages we're getting somewhere.

Haven't found a good gun yet, I'm still undecided. But in the meantime, I hope you'll like this:
http://i1208.photobucket.com/albums/cc3 ... hull-3.png
Thinking of joining the bridge and hangar together... Good idea?

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Post subject: Re: Anghellis Class CruiserPosted: May 19th, 2011, 4:08 pm
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I like it, but lower the entire bridge structure one deck, and don't forget the bow 'deck'
and we will join them both with an structure soon ( or at leas close the back) but leave it emty now, there need to be some stuff for the reactor over there.

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Post subject: Re: Anghellis Class CruiserPosted: May 19th, 2011, 4:34 pm
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Here you go.

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Masts aren't aligned like on the Sachsen anymore, should I lower the top-plate too to compensate for this?

EDIT: spotted one double black line. Should be fixed now.

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Post subject: Re: Anghellis Class CruiserPosted: May 19th, 2011, 4:43 pm
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what do you mean with aligned just like sachsen?
otherwise it looks ok, please let me mod it a bit.....

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Post subject: Re: Anghellis Class CruiserPosted: May 19th, 2011, 4:55 pm
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I mean that on the Sachsen, the APAR is a few pixels taller then the top-plate. On this one it is also a few pixels taller, yet not as tall as on the Sachsen.

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Post subject: Re: Anghellis Class CruiserPosted: May 19th, 2011, 5:11 pm
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ah. well, the SMART-L should be below the 'plate' of the APAR. as long as you have that, you should be ok.

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Post subject: Re: Anghellis Class CruiserPosted: May 19th, 2011, 6:02 pm
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Nah, it's still not entirely below the APAR, but I'll correct that when you make your edit.

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Post subject: Re: Anghellis Class CruiserPosted: June 11th, 2011, 2:31 am
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Why does it carry ICBM's?

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