Hi cvbbdd,
I've done a drawing to show you what I meant:
See how your turret has the guns more widely spaced on a smaller barbette? Because the turret's so short you can't fit in a bigger barbette, making the gunlaying very cramped.
Also, the AA cruiser looks formidable, but the turrets you've shown have significant deck penetration, I think. I'm not sure if you've left room for the engines on this design.
Regards,
Adam
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