with all due respect, but that might be because your eyes are untrained due to not being used to looking, and I mean REALLY looking at real ships. this is a common problem with new users here, something we try to avoid by suggesting to draw an existing ship first (and with that, training to look at how ships really work) before trying own designs.
if you compare it with the drawings Novice posted, I see a few very apparent things:
- the superstructure is quite stern heavy
- the amount of sloops, common before the titanic disaster, would mean the max amount of people on board would be..... about 400 maximum. kind of a big ship for just 400 including crew, is it not?
- you have cargo holds but no means to load them
- you have windows in your cargo holds
- your machinery is very far aft, judging by your funnels. this limits the size, making the ship somewhat slow compared to other liners of its size, even with 3 propellers.
- the ship has an hull shape that fits more on a warship then on a liner.
- the superstructure is very uniform, something unlikely for a ship of this era
- the lifeboats are lowered onto the deck 2 levels lower currently, not into the sea
- your drawing lacks many details.
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