An improvement, but some work still need to be done.
As mentioned above the railings need to be in the standard SB style. These can be found either
Here, or any other ship in the archive. In short the railings need to be either grey or a modified color of the superstructure behind the railings.
Also, please note that we don't draw a line where the water is, in front and aft of the ship.
Last remark concerns the fonts used in the credits lines, they should be Arial 7.5 for your name and Arial 10 for ship's name, and that is when using MS-Paint of windows XP.
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Thank you Kim for the crest
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