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ok guys I think I got it, this is much better than the last one.

for some reason its not letting me post the new image I'll try again latter.

There's nothing wrong in keeping this in Beginners, at least Colonel Bauer is abiding by the convention as a new member, but that said welcome aboard

ok, then, but I thought so because the description of the beginners forum is this:
This is a forum for newbies and beginners to post their first designs. Anything can be posted here but it must all be shipbucket-style.

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I fixed it.

A vast improvement, but still the wheels look like they are hanging in the air. You need to draw the lower body, and shade the whole thing.

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