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Hallo at all,

my second drawing. Hope you enjoy.
Here you see the ADLER VII, it´s a ship what takes turns arround the island of Sylt (Germany).
She´s 36,77 m long and 6,90m wide. There´s space for 200 passengers on bord.
Launch was in 1980.

Please tell me what´s wrong or if i can change something for the better.



AReuter

Well, on first glance, the 50m mark on the scale is where the 100m mark should be, so the ship is twice the size it should be.
Black lines should be used on the underwater hull, and anything representing a 90* corner. For corners around and less than 45*, then a dark colored line is used.
Other than it's overscale, it is a good start.

WhyMe posted the other ships of the Adler 'series' here, so you can use these for a comparison.

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Apart from the above, I also would like to see how you will complete your previous ship Wappen von Hamburg

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Hello,
the fixed version of the ADLER VII.

Not bad, so far. Just a few points.
The railings should be in a light grey not black.
At your bridge windows you got a double black line, ther should only be one.
And between the red underwater hull and the white main body you may add a black water line.

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@Cascadia, as I've found in very rare cases, a double black line can be retained if there is no other way to properly represent that particular item. I've found that this is especially prevalent on smaller ships, such as this one.

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I am not very active on the forums anymore, but work is still being done on my AUs. Visit the Salidan Altiverse Page on the SB Wiki for more information. All current work is being done on Google Docs.
If anyone wishes for their nations to interact with the countries of the Salidan Altiverse, please send me a PM, after which we can further discuss through email.

Here the fixed version.
Thank´s for the comments!