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First drawing, the original was much cleaner but shrinking it down to scale size affected it quite a bit. Not a fan of sea shepards, but it's a beautiful design!

Welcome , Sombody who starts with a small ship and a civilian one this bodes well for the future .

JSB

Hmmm....



RHIB, Quadrotor, Spike-ER and 25mm Typhoon

Better?

Well if your going to be like that, You have loads of missing black lines and even double black lines as well !



JSB

Touché

It's the newest in dazzle camouflage, pirates are sticklers for that sort of thing and it's just the thing to distract them

civilian ships are registered in a country (otherwise they cannot be insured) so there should be a country name listed.
shipbucket also has a standard template size, could you please use that?
waterlines are by definition level. as you currently have, it is not as the outrigger is lower in the water then the rest of your ship (meaning that your other outrigger would be in the air and your ship no longer drawn straight from the side)

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A little better I hope!

Geting better but still grey outline on lots of places should be black if its the edge of anything sharp,
JSB

A lot of the transitions are pretty smooth on the real ship but I added some more black lines anyway

Sorry for not explaining myself,

The earlier one was better with the grey lines on the ship. It just the edges on the horizon that have to be black according to shipbucket rules so the edges of the drawing.

So IMO you should go back to last one and just then outline the silhouette/horizon in black and you will be finished.

Hope that makes sense, grey lines inside the ship is defiantly, ok and good if less than 90 deg angles.

JSB