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Minesweeper: Chiem class

- Bridge windows, where are they?
- Funnel, for your engines?
- Shading under overhang etc. could have been improved, look at other shipbucket drawings as an inspiration
- Study other minesweeper and see what equipment the usually have on deck.
- window color, could be a bit lighter.
- National flag is carried at stern and not bow, usually it's just a small vimpel or flag in the bow

Fast attack craft: Laacher class

- Bridge window?
- I doubt the ship will be able to carry a 60mm so high up and two of them. Fast attack crafts are usually light for a reason. I would go for 56mm (Nato standard) on forward deck, and either a 20mm or if you have to a 40mm on the aft deck, with a shield between the gun and the missile launcher, or move the missile launcher aft where the RHIB is, extend the superstructure more aft, and put the gun there, but a deck lower.
- when a ship carry missiles, we usually post the missile above the vessel.
- ship with waterjet, does not have a ruder, the waterjet is also an ruder!
- National flag is carried at stern and not bow, usually it's just a small vimpel or flag in the bow

corvette: Bavaria class

- main deck doesn't need to be the same height as the helicopter Hangar, you just lose valuable space.
- If the ship have Hangar for the helicopter, the helicopter should be posted on deck, if it's flying, then there is no Hangar and your deck height is pointless.
- Normal deck height in shipbucket is 16 to 18 px high
- You need an funnel... the smoke from the engine doesn't magically disappear by itself.... it's not a small pleasure craft.
- The angle of the propeller is wrong. a propeller shouldn't point in a different direction than the propeller shaft.
- a corvette would usually have torpedoes onboard and a launcher for those torpedoes.
- look at other drawings in the forum for underwater shading.
- and the bridge window... have you seen a warship with bridge windows almost as big as a man.
- window colors...

I recommend look at Shipbucket drawing and shading rule: http://shipbucket.com/styleguide

Author:	Mauser [ May 17th, 2020, 3:11 pm ]
Post subject:	Rhineland Navy \| Alternate germany
My personal made country's Navy. Rhineland Navy. Current ships are the Minesweeper and Fast attack craft Parts currently

Author:	Mauser [ May 19th, 2020, 9:01 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Rhineland Navy \| Alternate germany
Added a corvette. Bavaria class. Built in 1980s. Current year is 1999

Author:	TJW [ May 19th, 2020, 10:35 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Rhineland Navy \| Alternate germany
Looks interesting. Would love to see more & some background story too.

Author:	heuhen [ May 22nd, 2020, 5:56 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Rhineland Navy \| Alternate germany
- I would post this in Alternativ universe topic Minesweeper: Chiem class - Bridge windows, where are they? - Funnel, for your engines? - Shading under overhang etc. could have been improved, look at other shipbucket drawings as an inspiration - Study other minesweeper and see what equipment the usually have on deck. - window color, could be a bit lighter. - National flag is carried at stern and not bow, usually it's just a small vimpel or flag in the bow Fast attack craft: Laacher class - Bridge window? - I doubt the ship will be able to carry a 60mm so high up and two of them. Fast attack crafts are usually light for a reason. I would go for 56mm (Nato standard) on forward deck, and either a 20mm or if you have to a 40mm on the aft deck, with a shield between the gun and the missile launcher, or move the missile launcher aft where the RHIB is, extend the superstructure more aft, and put the gun there, but a deck lower. - when a ship carry missiles, we usually post the missile above the vessel. - ship with waterjet, does not have a ruder, the waterjet is also an ruder! - National flag is carried at stern and not bow, usually it's just a small vimpel or flag in the bow corvette: Bavaria class - main deck doesn't need to be the same height as the helicopter Hangar, you just lose valuable space. - If the ship have Hangar for the helicopter, the helicopter should be posted on deck, if it's flying, then there is no Hangar and your deck height is pointless. - Normal deck height in shipbucket is 16 to 18 px high - You need an funnel... the smoke from the engine doesn't magically disappear by itself.... it's not a small pleasure craft. - The angle of the propeller is wrong. a propeller shouldn't point in a different direction than the propeller shaft. - a corvette would usually have torpedoes onboard and a launcher for those torpedoes. - look at other drawings in the forum for underwater shading. - and the bridge window... have you seen a warship with bridge windows almost as big as a man. - window colors... I recommend look at Shipbucket drawing and shading rule: http://shipbucket.com/styleguide

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