I'd suggest you lower the 'y'-turret level with the weather deck and move it further aft, creating a wholesome space between the turrets, thus separating the magazines and shell-rooms. You can, in fact, lengthen the aft portion of your armor belt enough to include the turret bases beneath the quarter-deck. Otherwise your design is starting to look decent, though your stem design is a tad bland for my taste. Also, the Bofors M/1948s are of an obsolete design, and thus should not be used. I am sure you can find alternate guns, more age-appropriate to replace them with!
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If you want to do a 1930`s-1940`s refit I`d suggest a new superstructure and merge the two funnels as most WWI-era BB refits had. I do believe you should lower the aftmost turret, it looks better that way.