Shipbucket

Here is a refinement of your work. with a little bit of help.

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I'm gonna edit that further tomorrow/make some personal changes. Thanks for the help though...

Barnest, No worries man, it is your design, I just followed your original concept. Wonderful progress so far, btw.

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I like most of it I should have joined up the hanger to the main superstructure long ago
The new boat is probably better. I need to change the colour though
The one thing I want to change is the stack. I like having a central stack rather than what appears to be a double stack on that drawing. Otherwise, you'll see the new one tomorrow

What do we think to this:

Combines night hunters excellent additions with where I think it should go.

Well to have a central funnel like you want, you are going to want to merge the Fore and Aft Deckhouses.

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Done

The stairs on the side, is it merged with the outer hull plates?
Because then you can leave away the 2nd black stripe, wich actually shows it is the side plate of the stairs, with nothing under it.

I would also suggest a nose tip mooring ring, for the dwarspeek (dont know english word).

Mitch

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Embarked on: HNLMS Karel Doorman A833
To do list:
-Zeven Provincien class cruiser
-Joint support ship all sides
-F124 Sachsen class frigate
-F125 Baden-Württemberg class frigate
-Clemencau class aircraft carrier
-Zeven provincien class frigate
-Poolster class AOR
-Amsterdam class AOR
-Minas Gerais aircraft carrier

A chock at the stem of a ship is referred to as a bullnose.
The spaces behind the ladders (stair and vertical ladder) need to be filled in.
The superstructure looks like one continous structure, it needs some line to break it up.
Railings on top of the superstructure and forecastle.
Hatches, porthole, lifesaving gear, firefighting gear, etc.

I also think that the gun is too close to the superstructure, which will adveresely limit its arcs of fire. Your superstructure looks too uniform, not what can be seen on real ships. You need to break it up a little, by height, by width.
As mentoined earlier - details, like portholes hatches, ladders etc'.

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