Well, IMHO, it's more aesthetically pleasing than at-launch, but...it also looks like an OTL Alaska. Practically identical, and I think that kind of defeats the purpose of the whole exercise in the first place.
Also, I still think the armament is weak - I still think you should go for three triple-tube turrets for a true Alaska analogue.
It was an excercise to me to develop my 20s Alaska to a stage were it looked like the real Alaska. But the roots are still the 20s ship. And, for this is my version, not an analogue, I keep the armament. I won't repeat my reasons.
But please continue commenting, me and others can only learn from that and get better.