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Author: | ezgo394 [ September 28th, 2014, 8:58 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: United States of Venezuela |
Yes, I concur. Looks great KIKE! As for your dreadnought, it's looking good. You're on the right track. Just look for inspiration in other ships and you'll get it figured out. |
Author: | Krakatoa [ September 29th, 2014, 6:59 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: United States of Venezuela |
That looks good Kike92, Though there are a couple of things that might help it, your main belt needs to extend a bit each way to cover the magazines of A and Y turrets, You have the US directors for your main armament which is fine, then you have the UK main director (which is not a Dual purpose director) to run your 5" secondaries, if you have a look at the RNRadarSheet there is a complete row of Directors, you want the HACS type or even the Mk V which I like the look of (you really need four, 2 where you have the UK mains and another pair either side of the bridge at the same level as the forward director). Lastly your AA armament is quite weak for a 1941 rebuild, all I can see is single and/or twin 20mm guns. At that time you would be fitting 40mm (twins/quads) or 2pd (octuple/quad). You have an area just aft of the funnel where you could fit a heavy AA battery. I do not comment very often so you can be sure I like your ship and want to help you make the most of it. Keep up the good work, Nigel |
Author: | KIKE92 [ September 29th, 2014, 9:02 pm ] | |
Post subject: | Re: United States of Venezuela | |
That looks good Kike92,
Hi Krakatoa, really appreciate the advice and im already working on a revised drawing and im also working on the rebuilt version of the Táchira class battleships, but one thing i have to point out is that the directors are not british or american they are venezuelan, if you compare them with the ones on the part sheets will see they are different.Though there are a couple of things that might help it, your main belt needs to extend a bit each way to cover the magazines of A and Y turrets, You have the US directors for your main armament which is fine, then you have the UK main director (which is not a Dual purpose director) to run your 5" secondaries, if you have a look at the RNRadarSheet there is a complete row of Directors, you want the HACS type or even the Mk V which I like the look of (you really need four, 2 where you have the UK mains and another pair either side of the bridge at the same level as the forward director). Lastly your AA armament is quite weak for a 1941 rebuild, all I can see is single and/or twin 20mm guns. At that time you would be fitting 40mm (twins/quads) or 2pd (octuple/quad). You have an area just aft of the funnel where you could fit a heavy AA battery. I do not comment very often so you can be sure I like your ship and want to help you make the most of it. Keep up the good work, Nigel Thanks for the advice, Luis |
Author: | KIKE92 [ October 4th, 2014, 6:05 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: United States of Venezuela |
Hello everyone, this is my first attempt at making aircraft weapons i hope you like it. |
Author: | eswube [ October 5th, 2014, 8:32 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: United States of Venezuela |
Nice additions. I see strong French influences with missiles. |
Author: | odysseus1980 [ October 10th, 2014, 10:56 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: United States of Venezuela |
Congratulations for your fighters! |
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