Just some nitpicking...
- The aft 6" mount should move abit forward, I think the hull is to shallow so close to stern, and you would minize the length of the armour belt aswell.
- You are using the 6" M/03-12 double mount sideview but a single mount top view. I think I would be good to use 3 or 4 twin mounts. The mounts are not true barbetteturrets but rather mount and hoist with an allround armoured shield.
Feel free to compare her with my similar cruisers.
Gävle 1918
Admiral 1912
Mod Amiral 1916
PLEASE - do a Springsharp calculation of her!!!