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Redhorse
Post subject: Re: The Republic of the United States of DentonPosted: May 2nd, 2011, 3:23 pm
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I agree with earlier assessments. Your drawings have improved a great deal from when you first started. It's a sign of growth.

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Post subject: Re: The Republic of the United States of DentonPosted: May 2nd, 2011, 9:39 pm
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Thank you Redhorse. Currently, I am working a lot and have no time to draw ships, so this AU will take a while to develop.

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Post subject: Re: The Republic of the United States of DentonPosted: May 30th, 2011, 10:48 pm
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New Carrier. WIP
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Raven
Post subject: Re: The Republic of the United States of DentonPosted: June 1st, 2011, 4:23 am
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I know this design is still in it's nascent stages, so in my humble opinion you should delete the VLS forest ahead of the bridge, as you have escorts to handle the missile wrangling.

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Post subject: Re: The Republic of the United States of DentonPosted: June 1st, 2011, 4:31 am
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It looks a little over-blocky imo

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Thiel
Post subject: Re: The Republic of the United States of DentonPosted: June 1st, 2011, 4:59 am
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It does look a bit like someone threw a skyscraper into the sea

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Post subject: Re: The Republic of the United States of DentonPosted: June 2nd, 2011, 6:40 pm
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Carnac wrote:
It looks a little over-blocky imo
Yea, my first thought "Slab sided" reminds me of the 70's USN, maybe reduce the island size if possible.


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ezgo394
Post subject: Re: The Republic of the United States of DentonPosted: June 10th, 2011, 3:19 am
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Okay, since I decided to cancel the carrier once again, I decided to make a patrol corvette?
Anyways, this is what I have so far, based off of sebu's Littoral Corvette.
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Thiel
Post subject: Re: The Republic of the United States of DentonPosted: June 10th, 2011, 4:46 am
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Remember the credits.
Anyway, it seems rather plain. You've still got lots of detailing to do.

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Post subject: Re: The Republic of the United States of DentonPosted: June 10th, 2011, 8:39 am
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and an I-mast 100 would be an better fit, and yeah, I know it looks like an party hat then :P

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