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Author:  acelanceloet [ March 21st, 2011, 8:42 pm ]
Post subject:  schelde (damen) enforcer series
I will post here all newdrawn enforcer never builds. references (especially lengths and sideviews) are welcome.
first of all, the 24000, the last LHD of this line (the concepts for the johan de witt, LHD 17000, 24000 and 30000)
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comments?
Author:  acelanceloet [ March 23rd, 2011, 2:25 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: schelde (damen) enforcer series
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Author:  Thiel [ March 23rd, 2011, 2:56 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: schelde (damen) enforcer series
There's a double line under the crane and along the top of the vehicle ramp, the platform supports on the masts would look a lot better in three pixel with, there's no shading under the platforms and the stairs aft could use some attention. Right now they look curved.
The cut outs in the hull could do with some heavier shading, and there should also be shaded under the anchor.
There's a gap in the waterline between the aft mast and the RHIB.
Unless the ship is riveted together, we normally don't show panel lines.
The Detailing on the ramp could do with some more contrast, right now it looks like JPEG artefacts unless you zoom in on it.
Author:  acelanceloet [ March 23rd, 2011, 3:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: schelde (damen) enforcer series
Thiel wrote:
There's a double line under the crane and along the top of the vehicle ramp,
nothing to do about it, as these parts should be on exact those positions....
Thiel wrote:
the platform supports on the masts would look a lot better in three pixel with,
I disagree
Thiel wrote:
there's no shading under the platforms
that's because they aren't that much wider then the mast, but I could add a little shading there.... but only a little.
Thiel wrote:
and the stairs aft could use some attention. Right now they look curved.
I agree
Thiel wrote:
The cut outs in the hull could do with some heavier shading, and there should also be shaded under the anchor.
no need for it in the cutouts, but I will fix the anchor
Thiel wrote:
There's a gap in the waterline between the aft mast and the RHIB.
will fix
Thiel wrote:
Unless the ship is riveted together, we normally don't show panel lines.
the ship looked very empty without them, and recently some ships have them added... (like Miho's LCF) so I thought it would be ok....... but I can remove them if needed, can an admin please make clear if that should be done?
Thiel wrote:
The Detailing on the ramp could do with some more contrast, right now it looks like JPEG artefacts unless you zoom in on it.
will fix, but couldn't you have said that earlier? I have to fix it on 5 ships now already -.-
Author:  acelanceloet [ March 23rd, 2011, 3:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: schelde (damen) enforcer series
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all ships of the enforcer series that needed fixes:
any other comments?
most likely I will post the LPD 15000 tonight.
Author:  Thiel [ March 23rd, 2011, 4:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: schelde (damen) enforcer series
I'd raise the crane instead of lowering it, so that it doesn't merge with the superstructure.
The shading is of course up to you, but on my monitor at least, I can hardly see it unless I zoom in on it.

As for the ramp, I haven't really looked all that much on this thread since I don't like the Enforcer designs.
Author:  Colombamike [ March 23rd, 2011, 4:24 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: schelde (damen) enforcer series
The Enforcer 11000 LPD design still lacking some MINOR details (bridge level details, island, ect...)
Author:  acelanceloet [ March 23rd, 2011, 4:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: schelde (damen) enforcer series
there still need to be added some lights on it, otherwise it is finished IMO.... island?
Author:  Mitchell van Os [ March 23rd, 2011, 4:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: schelde (damen) enforcer series
The LPD misses a lot of details.
Look at the Rotterdam/JDW for the details.
You can not miss them!
Author:  acelanceloet [ March 23rd, 2011, 4:30 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: schelde (damen) enforcer series
details like what? this ship isn't one of those, so I cannot say it will have exactly the same....
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