Shipbucket

That depends, but from where I stand it's fine. He might want to draw them in just to see how they look and decide from himself though.
It represents shading to give the illusion of a round cylinder. It looks fine to me too but I question if it's up to the spirit of the Shipbucket style. You might want to try a wider band of a lighter shade of gray instead, like what I do with my Konigsreich von Namaqua ships (or what Golly does for his, I stole the technique from him after all )
Yes. Chuck ship art came in here and after one or two renditions of this thing he's proven he's got what it takes to become a top-tier drawer on this forum. I'm quite impressed with his lightning-fast progress to say the least.

Good drawing, very good in fact. Some issues concerning the SB style, like the single white line on the funnels for instance. It is a good idea to watch colosseum's work on American ships for the style issues, but never the less it is a good drawing IMHO.

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Thank you Kim for the crest

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I know, I just meant a single white line as such was a bit odd shading. Perhaps I should have been clearer.

I change the shading a little hope this looks better Charles

Looks good. Don't forget to clean up the underwater hull shading (most is good, but there are a few places where it goes a bit wacky near the bow, stern, and the shafts), and the shading on the barbetts.

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