Overall it looks good, although there are some pixle-errors here and there on the drawing.
However, I'm not too sure that doing a widespread copy-paste of Erusia_Force IJN Yamato onto ALVAMA's original B65 would do the job (also, the aircraft-handling crane seems the one from Colosseum's IJN Tone).
According to Lacroix and Wells "Japanese Cruisers of the Pacific War", the B65 as planned was to fit four triple 25mm machine guns (there are twenty sets in the drawing) and two sets of 13mm machine guns (it has none). The aircraft handling setup was to have two cranes revolving around a single centerline-mounted catapult, the drawing suggests the opposite. There were to be three searchlights abaft the funnel and no MG director there. Plus a bunch of other stuff (some technically dating back tot he original aLVAMA work, like the protruding bulbous bow instead of a straight one).
sorry for apparently shooting it down, but there is room for improvement