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| Author: | 1143M [ April 23rd, 2017, 7:16 am ] |
| Post subject: | Icebreaking research vessel Xue Long |
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| Author: | Rodondo [ April 23rd, 2017, 9:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Icebreaking research vessel Xue Long |
Nice! Though I'd recommend looking at the shape of the hull as she has a more "shapely" hull that what seems to be depicted. |
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| Author: | Gollevainen [ April 23rd, 2017, 9:18 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Icebreaking research vessel Xue Long |
That looks good. And i don't believe the hull needs much work, its good as it is as a shipbucket drawing |
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| Author: | 1143M [ April 23rd, 2017, 9:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Icebreaking research vessel Xue Long |
Nice! Though I'd recommend looking at the shape of the hull as she has a more "shapely" hull that what seems to be depicted.
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| Author: | Rodondo [ April 23rd, 2017, 9:37 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Icebreaking research vessel Xue Long |
Sorry auto-correct got me there, shading not shape, the shape looks fine but IMO there should be more shading fore and aft under the water. Might want to check your credits and title line, seem to be off the line |
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| Author: | acelanceloet [ April 23rd, 2017, 9:54 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Icebreaking research vessel Xue Long |
I'm with Rodondo here, your shading now suggests an very round bow and a very flat stern in cross section, something quite far away from the streamlined hull the model and render show. |
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| Author: | 1143M [ April 24th, 2017, 11:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Icebreaking research vessel Xue Long |
Sorry auto-correct got me there, shading not shape, the shape looks fine but IMO there should be more shading fore and aft under the water.
Might want to check your credits and title line, seem to be off the line ![[ img ]](http://orig09.deviantart.net/f88f/f/2017/114/7/2/xue_long_by_1143m-db6yhw5.png) Satisfied？ |
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| Author: | heuhen [ April 24th, 2017, 1:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Icebreaking research vessel Xue Long |
for me the shading is good enough. But don't forget to fix the credit. We do have an standard on how the credit should be, it's all written in the shipbucket rule page |
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| Author: | Colosseum [ April 24th, 2017, 2:03 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Icebreaking research vessel Xue Long |
His credits are fine. What's important is that he has drawn a nice real life ship - the font size of the credits aren't that big of a deal.  Very good work! |
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| Author: | Rodondo [ April 24th, 2017, 3:22 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Icebreaking research vessel Xue Long |
Yeah that seems to fit the bill |
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