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Author: | Hawkeye [ March 16th, 2012, 11:07 pm ] |
Post subject: | CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau |
Have need more time because of my health siuation. Well, here is it now. Hope you like it. Enjoy! |
Author: | Bombhead [ March 16th, 2012, 11:26 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau |
Looks good to me mate. |
Author: | Colosseum [ March 17th, 2012, 4:07 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau |
I'm sorry but this is just not good enough. I know you are a new drawer but you will need to add more detail, shading, etc for this to be "up to snuff". It has a sloppy feeling to it. From the way the drawing is presented I don't get the feeling that you really "know" what you're looking at but have rather just traced lines on a drawing which is NOT ACCEPTABLE. |
Author: | Biancini1995 [ March 17th, 2012, 4:12 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau |
yeah it needs more improvement but take care of your health first as you said |
Author: | Rodondo [ March 17th, 2012, 4:18 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau |
An excellent start, but shading! |
Author: | Hawkeye [ March 18th, 2012, 3:47 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau |
Better? |
Author: | heuhen [ March 18th, 2012, 4:05 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau |
under the B turret, the lines are not correct: |
Author: | Hawkeye [ March 18th, 2012, 5:00 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau |
Thanks Heuhen. |
Author: | Colosseum [ March 18th, 2012, 8:59 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau |
This is the Oakland class??? |
Author: | Wolfman [ May 14th, 2012, 7:25 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau |
The hull number needs to be larger on the bow, check navsource. |
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