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Author:  Hawkeye [ March 16th, 2012, 11:07 pm ]
Post subject:  CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau

Have need more time because of my health siuation.
Well, here is it now. Hope you like it. Enjoy!

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Author:  Bombhead [ March 16th, 2012, 11:26 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau

Looks good to me mate. ;)

Author:  Colosseum [ March 17th, 2012, 4:07 am ]
Post subject:  Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau

I'm sorry but this is just not good enough. I know you are a new drawer but you will need to add more detail, shading, etc for this to be "up to snuff". It has a sloppy feeling to it.

From the way the drawing is presented I don't get the feeling that you really "know" what you're looking at but have rather just traced lines on a drawing which is NOT ACCEPTABLE.

Author:  Biancini1995 [ March 17th, 2012, 4:12 am ]
Post subject:  Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau

yeah it needs more improvement but take care of your health first as you said ;)

Author:  Rodondo [ March 17th, 2012, 4:18 am ]
Post subject:  Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau

An excellent start, but shading!

Author:  Hawkeye [ March 18th, 2012, 3:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau

Better?

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Author:  heuhen [ March 18th, 2012, 4:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau

under the B turret, the lines are not correct:

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Author:  Hawkeye [ March 18th, 2012, 5:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau

Thanks Heuhen.

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Author:  Colosseum [ March 18th, 2012, 8:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau

This is the Oakland class???

Author:  Wolfman [ May 14th, 2012, 7:25 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: CLAA-119 U.S.S. Juneau

The hull number needs to be larger on the bow, check navsource.

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