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Author: | ALVAMA [ February 23rd, 2012, 3:00 pm ] |
Post subject: | USS Texas |
Author: | Colosseum [ February 23rd, 2012, 3:10 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: USS Texas |
As always, quite excellent art-wise but sadly lacking in some details. I think you need to spend more time thoroughly researching your ships before you just leap into drawing. I'd also like to see an evolution so to speak -- just drawing the ship as it appears in 1945 does not (in my opinion cut it). Your Kingfishers are not sitting on any catapult pedestals but rather floating in midair. The radar fit for this ship is also incorrect in some places - notably you are missing SG surface search sets and FD Mark 3 fire control radar above the foremast. As always, you can find good reference at NavSource, especially for famous ships like BB-35. This one will need to be absolutely perfect in my eyes before I am ready to sign off on it! All that said, I applaud your effort and am glad to see someone else drawing USN designs of WWII! |
Author: | ALVAMA [ February 23rd, 2012, 3:11 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: USS Texas |
Okay fill fix! |
Author: | Colosseum [ February 23rd, 2012, 3:12 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: USS Texas |
(I edited my above post, please make sure to read it!) |
Author: | Wolfman [ February 23rd, 2012, 3:16 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: USS Texas |
It's about time somebody got around to working on the last first generation dreadnought battleship left in the world. |
Author: | ALVAMA [ February 23rd, 2012, 3:29 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: USS Texas |
I fixed the plane! About the raders yes you are right, but also I did add those radars, but my means my reference drawing didn't show them properly, since I know the names I have fixed them with your ones! |
Author: | Wolfman [ February 23rd, 2012, 3:55 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: USS Texas |
It's looking much better, now, ALVAMA. |
Author: | Colosseum [ February 23rd, 2012, 4:20 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: USS Texas |
I'll help with the radars, but I can't guarantee I can really do anything until next Monday. |
Author: | ALVAMA [ February 23rd, 2012, 4:30 pm ] | |
Post subject: | Re: USS Texas | |
I'll help with the radars, but I can't guarantee I can really do anything until next Monday.
No problem!
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Author: | nighthunter [ February 23rd, 2012, 4:47 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: USS Texas |
Alvama, your Kingfishers are too low now. they need to sit on the catapult, two pixels above where you have them. Nice work though. |
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