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Author: | WWII44 [ August 16th, 2011, 7:30 pm ] |
Post subject: | ST Brooklyn |
Here is my first real design, the tugboat Brooklyn |
Author: | acelanceloet [ August 16th, 2011, 7:40 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: ST Brooklyn |
may I see an picture of the real ship? I cannot think that the real ships looks like that.... |
Author: | WWII44 [ August 16th, 2011, 7:48 pm ] | |
Post subject: | Re: ST Brooklyn | |
may I see an picture of the real ship? I cannot think that the real ships looks like that....
this is the pic I used as reference:
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Author: | acelanceloet [ August 16th, 2011, 7:53 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: ST Brooklyn |
hmm. the colours are off (or you have more references, where I don't know of, in that case I have never said this:P ) and the funnel has an way too big diameter. also I miss some detailing (for example the steampipe forward of the funnel) and many details seem to be overscaled (for example masthead, rudder). I was wrong about the basic shape indeed, I stand corrected, but still your drawing doesn't looks like the model at all, IMO. |
Author: | WWII44 [ August 16th, 2011, 8:00 pm ] | |
Post subject: | Re: ST Brooklyn | |
hmm. the colours are off (or you have more references, where I don't know of, in that case I have never said this:P ) and the funnel has an way too big diameter. also I miss some detailing (for example the steampipe forward of the funnel) and many details seem to be overscaled (for example masthead, rudder). I was wrong about the basic shape indeed, I stand corrected, but still your drawing doesn't looks like the model at all, IMO.
I'll have to fix those later, I have other projects in need of my attention as well(Castel Conwy for example)
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Author: | Novice [ August 16th, 2011, 9:05 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: ST Brooklyn |
You should also change the credidts' font. Look at the archive or the SB guidelines to see the correct fonts. As for the drawing, it is a very good effort on a first ship, but Ace is right. Details and the funnel size and color seems at odds with the model. |
Author: | WWII44 [ August 16th, 2011, 10:08 pm ] | |
Post subject: | Re: ST Brooklyn | |
You should also change the credidts' font. Look at the archive or the SB guidelines to see the correct fonts. As for the drawing, it is a very good effort on a first ship, but Ace is right. Details and the funnel size and color seems at odds with the model.
I used this for color reference:
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