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Author:  Drew_Air [ October 7th, 2022, 1:49 pm ]
Post subject:  High Speed vessels
Incat Tasmania's Hull 89.
Operator: Virtu Ferries
Route: MALTA,VALLETTA-SICILY,POZZALLO
Length: 110.6m
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Author:  Drew_Air [ October 7th, 2022, 1:58 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Fast Ferries
Incat Tasmania's Hull 088
Operator: Molslinjen
Route: AARHUS-ODDEN-EBELTOFT-ODDEN, DENMARK
Length: 109m
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Author:  Drew_Air [ October 7th, 2022, 2:06 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Fast Ferries
Incat Tasmania's Hull 051
Operator: Ponte Ferries
Route: MALTA,VALLETTA-SICILY,AUGUSTA
Length: 96m
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Author:  eswube [ October 11th, 2022, 8:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: High Speed vessels
Hi!
Welcome to the SB. Sorry for late comment (that applies also to Your entry in Beginner's Forum).
It's a nice start, but these works have some quite significant issues.

On a formal level: the scale bar looks rather "fuzzy", there's an orange "frame" all around the template and the shipbucket logo in the bottom right corner is not the original one. Correct SB-scale templates can be found here: http://shipbucket.com/wiki/index.php/Category:Templates

Second thing is the shading: overhangs are marked even too strongly, but there's no highlight shade (showing parts that are facing towards the - implied - source of light, meaning roughly the upper right corner) nor shading showing curvature of relevant parts.

And another very important thing is the overuse of black. To begin with, the actual "black" is used ONLY for contours and the like. The "black paint" is a separate thing and a very dark grey is used instead. Also, the breaks in surface that are not at a right angle (or are simply an external contour) ought to be marked in dark shade of the color in which said element is painted. Finally, the lines, ropes, wire antennas, but also sold things that are +/- less than 15 cm (6 inches) in diameter are represented in dark grey (or other, relevant color) instead of black. Certainly the flaglines MUST NOT be black (meaning NOT the "contour black"). ;)

Last but not least, You have some "heavy corners".

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Author:  Drew_Air [ January 19th, 2023, 7:24 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: High Speed vessels
Update on Saint John Paul II.
Please give me feedback and any advice if you have. :D

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Author:  Drew_Air [ January 19th, 2023, 8:27 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: High Speed vessels
Another Update on Saint John Paul II.

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Author:  eswube [ January 23rd, 2023, 7:25 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: High Speed vessels
Sorry for late reply. Well, for starters, most of the issues I've mentioned previously are unfortunately still valid. Big issue is that we use the actual black only for contours (external, right angles and solid things that are physically separated from things behind them), but for "black paint" it should eb actually dark grey. Another thing is that except for some overhang shades, there is no other shading - and what's even more odd... most of the ship is actually "painted" in the background colour ("total white") - and it shouldn't be, because the "white paint" isn't actually white, but bit darker, to stand out of the template background. Finally, there are quitea lot of heavy corners and double black lines. :(

http://shipbucket.com/styleguide
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