Posts:2936 Joined: July 26th, 2010, 11:38 pm
Location: Midwest US
Certainly a competently-executed drawing, better than most. On such a visually flat ship, I personally would be looking for opportunities for more nitpicky detail shading. I'm thinking things like shading under platforms and inside cutouts, on satcom domes, liferaft containers, inside refueling gear, etc. I also don't love the window color. But these are all artistic choices for the individual.