miho, the ship looks good, apart from:
some double black pixel lines in the screw
Going to leave them. If I remove them, you lose a lot of the "depth" in the screw. Heck, simply remoding the shading already did that, I don't want ot lose the last bit of it.
APAR too large..... I know it is an bitch to redraw that entire mast, but....... well, the entire APAR is just a bit overscaled (1/2 pixels to all sides) I would go for perfection, but I have to admit yours looks good.... but I will add mine to the dutch parts sheet (unless you can make some better detail of it in the size I have now, then that one will be added) because ships in the future can't have that same overscaled part. if you don't want to redraw the structure, I am ok with that. but it is not exactly right, and doesn't belong on the sheet because of that. ok?
The APAR faces
themselves are the right size. Well, one pixel too high, but I gave my reasons for that, it was a deliberate artistic choise. Equally so is the reason that the TOWER is a half pixel on all sides too wide: We can't DRAW halfpixels. The bane of the scale and methods we work with. If we make the tower a single pixel less wide, we have to redraw the APAR faces. And THOSE are as close to perfection as I can make em. I really suggest that you accept the 15 cm too wide tower. It's simply an artefact of the methods we use. I'd rather have the APAR faces to scale than the tower, simply because a single pixel sizing error in the tower is less conspicuous than a sizing error in a radar face which is much smaller. I mean, that tower is only 2% too wide. Most people who draw from linedrawings scanned from books will make mistakes at least that big.
Remember, that resized picture I used too compare the drawing with, that came from a whole resized LCF picture. There's no scaling error in it, it's perfectly scaled.
what did I say..... IT LOOKS GREAT! mitch's one is just as good in case of drawing quality, but I think you have small details better then him. (and mostly some parts better looking
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I'm very happy wit the ship. Some of the detailing in fact came from Mitch. If he hadn't been so adamant about redrawing the whole ship and introducing his owm mistakes I have no doubt he would have produced something of similar quality. And to be honest...
A lot of the insane detailing (like the crane and the cannon and indentations in the side of the APAR tower) were the result of being pissed at Mitch and trying to outdo him...