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Author:  pepembr_mb [ December 25th, 2016, 11:49 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Argentinian and Brazilian ships
JSB, your drawning is in better shape than mine. I'll reduce the rudder.
Author:  pepembr_mb [ January 1st, 2017, 5:31 am ]
Post subject:  Revised Bahia Cruiser Design 1910
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Author:  pepembr_mb [ January 1st, 2017, 5:34 am ]
Post subject:  Revised Bahia Cruiser Design 1925
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Author:  pepembr_mb [ January 1st, 2017, 5:37 am ]
Post subject:  Revised Bahia Cruiser Design 1945
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Author:  Novice [ January 1st, 2017, 8:46 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Argentinian and Brazilian ships
A wonderful start for the New Year, pepembr_mb, but it seems that the underwater hull on the refitted ships (1925, and 1945) seems to be shallower than on the original version. It is mainly apparent on the rudder.
Author:  citizen lambda [ January 1st, 2017, 9:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Argentinian and Brazilian ships
Not bad at all.
I can't comment on the accuracy of the drawings, but there are a few formal points that can be improved:
- The shading of the stacks and other cylindrical parts is too photographic for the SB style, and clash with the rest of the drawing. The accepted standard is three levels of brightness around a half-cylinder for the same base hue.
- The shading of the bottom hull around the rudder is a nice effort for a fairly complex shape, but is also on the rich side and doesn't match the rest of the hull.
- In the original version, the top of the foremast should have no 2-pixel black segments. Stick either to 1 black line or 3 with a filler color.
- Some of the cables in the rigging of the original version don't fit together very well.
- The foot of the bow mast has disappeared behind the railing, in all versions.
- All versions except the first have leftover pixels from the original foremast hanging in the air.

If that's all there is to correct on your drawing, then good job!
Author:  pepembr_mb [ January 2nd, 2017, 5:04 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Argentinian and Brazilian ships
Novice wrote:
A wonderful start for the New Year, pepembr_mb, but it seems that the underwater hull on the refitted ships (1925, and 1945) seems to be shallower than on the original version. It is mainly apparent on the rudder.
Thank you Novice! Happy 2017!
Author:  pepembr_mb [ January 2nd, 2017, 5:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Argentinian and Brazilian ships
citizen lambda wrote:
Not bad at all.
I can't comment on the accuracy of the drawings, but there are a few formal points that can be improved:
- The shading of the stacks and other cylindrical parts is too photographic for the SB style, and clash with the rest of the drawing. The accepted standard is three levels of brightness around a half-cylinder for the same base hue.
- The shading of the bottom hull around the rudder is a nice effort for a fairly complex shape, but is also on the rich side and doesn't match the rest of the hull.
- In the original version, the top of the foremast should have no 2-pixel black segments. Stick either to 1 black line or 3 with a filler color.
- Some of the cables in the rigging of the original version don't fit together very well.
- The foot of the bow mast has disappeared behind the railing, in all versions.
- All versions except the first have leftover pixels from the original foremast hanging in the air.

If that's all there is to correct on your drawing, then good job!
I'll try to fix some points. They are not final designs. Thank you for the remarks.
Author:  pepembr_mb [ January 2nd, 2017, 7:56 pm ]
Post subject:  Bahia Light Cruiser in 1906, new bottom
I redid the hull undersurface according the only blueprint available. The propeller axis position is speculative.


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Author:  pepembr_mb [ January 2nd, 2017, 8:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Bahia Light Cruiser in 1925, third version
Next step is attack the rigging using photographic sources:


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