The new service Chinese Navy Warships

Great work - assuming it's all Yours and not kitbashed (in which case You'd have to include that in credits).
Welcome to the Shipbucket!

P.S. And I think that descriptions on template (those in English language) should be in different font.

Superb work, there... Welcome to shipbucket.

Type 056 Fixed some small details
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Very happy, can see some comrades drawing the Chinese people's Liberation Army Navy vessels. But the draw ratio is not so precise and perfect. As a fancier, mapping must have the exact proportion and the correct structure, can not arbitrarily change. If you want to communicate with me please Mail:jiaoheyuqiao@163.com.

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I'm exceedingly happy to see that we're expanding our membership with people with the knowledge to take on the modern Chinese navy.

Welcome.

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The Type 056 has a lot of issues.

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1) The torpedo door is too small and too far aft. It's actually slightly ahead of the FL-3000N launcher, not behind.
2) The FL-3000N launcher is too bulky. The Type 056 uses an 8 round version of it that is not that large. That looks more like the 20 round version.
3) There is no large roll up door on the starboard side. There is a roll up door on the port below the helipad for the ship's boat.
4) The turret lacks the drum shaped... thing, it has on the starboard side of it. It's also lacking the two prominent doors it has on the starboard side and the aft angling is far too sharp.
5) The aft mast is far too tall.
6) The enclosure around the engine intakes and exhausts is too short. The louvers on it are also too short and the small one on the aft part of the structure isn't one louver, it's two.
7) The cut out under the bridge actually extends forward into the angled portion and is lower.
8) The 30mm cannon is actually a surprisingly stubby gun, not a long barreled weapon.
9) The bridge structure is off. The cut back angled portion of the bridge wrap around windows doesn't meet up with the angled cutback on the superstructure. There's also just a single window on it. The other windows are on the flat portion of the structure. You're also missing a bridge door aft of them.
10) The cutouts for the mooring lineson the bow are in the wrong spot, size, and number. There's two, identical size, one father up on the bow and the one just forward of the gunmount is the same size and just one.
11) Not sure what the golden diamond thing is above the bridge but it's not there on the actual ship and you're missing sensors that are located there.
12) The Luda prop isn't right on my drawing, gonna go out on a limb and say it's probably not right on this one either.
13) Not really sure what that is but I don't see anything like it on the actual ship.
14) The upper portion of the sensor mast is a solid structure.
15) The anchor is lower on the bow and there's a tie off cutout above it.

Again, which has been pointed out, over and over again! - We cannot read Chinese! You can retain your Chinese characters, but below a line with the ship's name (if any!) or class-name (again, if any, since I think Chinese ship naming conventions are essentially different from our Western practices!).
As for the ship, I really cannot judge its accuracy. However, one detail sticks out as slightly odd, and I'd like for you to explain what its function is: The grey, book-page thing just at the center of the hangar. What is that, and should the lines be that light grey?

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Hi Bezo,

From bsmart's earlier comment, those are doors for torpedo tubes...

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Ahhh...makes sense apdsmith, but then the outlines ought to be black, since they're hull openings; at least the way I've understood it!

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