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Post subject: FlottenbegleiterPosted: July 29th, 2011, 2:57 pm
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Input welcomed.

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Post subject: Re: FlottenbegleiterPosted: July 29th, 2011, 5:34 pm
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Name?, specs?, how large class? Otherwise a very nice drawing of a small escort!

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Post subject: Re: FlottenbegleiterPosted: July 29th, 2011, 5:44 pm
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Nice start, for a really nice, if sadly badly designed warship, one of the famous "forgotten" ones.

few tips:
1. remove the black line between the hull and the sidepanels of the deckhouse, as there is a clear angle, but nothing structural between.
2. Add some shaddow to overhangs (and try to be consistent with the shaddowing style in all places)
3. Move the ventilation pipes abreast the funne so that nothing is between them (the front side of the pipe sharing the pixel with the back side of the funnel)

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Post subject: Re: FlottenbegleiterPosted: July 29th, 2011, 7:02 pm
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Nice start Cybermax. Bezzo, IIRC there were ten ships in this class, and they had no namas, just hull numbers. They also served as test beds for new marine steam installations, some of which wre later used in the Type 1936 class and later classes.

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Post subject: Re: FlottenbegleiterPosted: July 29th, 2011, 9:45 pm
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Updated and thanks for the comments and suggestions guys.

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Post subject: Re: FlottenbegleiterPosted: July 30th, 2011, 10:16 am
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Very nice work Cybermax. I can see no obvious faults myself, looks like a solid piece of SB art.

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Post subject: Re: FlottenbegleiterPosted: July 30th, 2011, 6:37 pm
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Nice work!

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Post subject: Re: FlottenbegleiterPosted: July 31st, 2011, 9:04 am
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Good drawing :D

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Post subject: Re: FlottenbegleiterPosted: August 1st, 2011, 7:20 am
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Well done. What are your sources? I ask 'cause I found a different aft at that drawing:
http://www.christian-schmidt.com/images ... %20F10.jpg
I'll take it for my KM'46 AU with some newer equipment, if I may.

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Post subject: Re: FlottenbegleiterPosted: August 1st, 2011, 8:00 pm
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Ashley wrote:
Well done. What are your sources? I ask 'cause I found a different aft at that drawing:
http://www.christian-schmidt.com/images ... %20F10.jpg
I'll take it for my KM'46 AU with some newer equipment, if I may.
Go right ahead. It is based on the top image here http://oi56.tinypic.com/eulnxf.jpg in a "1936" configuration.


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