Yes ships of that era have quite round shape, compared to today. But they aren't as round as you had shaded it. we shade at 45 degree or more, when we do hull shading.
- For underwater hull, we shade with only on color then two. it's only in extreme situation we do double shading on the underwater hull.
- The stern should have same color as rest of the hull, even when there is an overhang., we don't shad that extreme. The shading for how round the stern is, is still excessive dark.
- for over hang on the superstructure, you shade to much. we shade with 1px thick with a very dark shade color, and 2px with a lighter dark shade color under it, rest of everything under the overhang, should have same color as the superstructure. Superstructure color should be a little lighter in color tone then the hull, to differentiate between hull and superstructure.
The drawing bellow is how I would do it, the changes I did:
- adjusting deck height on the main deck, was a bit tall, it is still a bit tall but better then nothing. (can be lowered by 1 px)
- adjusting shading, on superstructure.
- adjusting shading on the hull. (this is how we represent these hulls on shipbucket, we try to draw these ships as how it would look like on a photo. If we have problem to get good information on the underwater-hull, then we do not draw the underwater-hull)
- added "fins" on the side of the hull (based on a drawing I found of this ship in war time configuration)
- lighten up shading of the stern.
- removed shading of the bow, even when the hull is round there, it shouldn't be any shading, du to in Shipbucket, we illustrate the light is coming from the front.
- Note. the coal-hatch on the hull side, could be colored in a very dark shading color, then using a black line around it, since the hatch is almost flush with the hull, and not sticking as much out of the hull.
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Things that I noticed with the drawing, is that it is almost impossible to modify the drawing with Microsoft Paint, I had to go in and do all colors manually! If the drawings are done in programs like Gimp/Photoshop/etc. make sure there isn't layers hiding behind the drawings. ot the file that is saved for posting on shipbucket is clean, since all shipbucket drawings in the archive, are supposed to be easy to modify on any paint/drawing software people are using)